The thing is, h/c can be SO GOOD; I guess where my problem comes in is when there's nothing to deepen it, or no significant emotional aspect, or anything going on except, as you mention, just a list of symptoms. But I need the emotional aspect to be intense and heavy. I guess I feel about it the same way I feel about PWP: there's only so many things one can insert/lick/kiss/suck on another person, so if there's nothing but physical description, I'm just like, "Yeah, and?" I need more than some vague hint that Sam's upset about Dean's hurt, too; I need it HEAVY, or for it to work on multiple levels, or for it to elucidate something about the brothers' relationship. I thought I would love the h/c, but too often I've tried to read it and come out of it feeling like nothing really happened except Dean suffered, which, you know, sad face.
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Date: 2013-10-16 03:47 am (UTC)