I"m here via spn_bigpretzel. This is a great idea and very funny. When Dean realized that the pay-per-view porn he was watching was about Sam, I literally LOL'd. It's all very well-done, but two of my favorite parts are Becky defending Sam against Chuck's depiction of his callous treatment of his one night stand lovers while he was soulless!Sam and Dean's enjoyment of teasing Sam and his hoping to enjoy the notoriety of the books by getting more hook-ups. My most very favorite part is this though:
“Great, Dean, perfect. Then think of all eight million of them the next time you try to do it with one of them, because you know they’ll be reading about it a few months later. Every single detail--whether it was good, whether it was bad, every piggish thought you had, how long you lasted ....”
Dean abruptly stopped smiling. Why did he have to say things like that? Freakin’ Sam! Why’d he have to be so ... so ... logical?! “Thank a lot, bro. Seriously, why’d you have to point that out? Now I won’t be able to do it at all!”
Sometimes I think too much emphasis is placed in fic on Sam being a wet blanket and spoilsport, but I really do see him having this reaction, not to mention how a lot of the humor comes from his being right about what would happen and Dean's reaction. He's almost more annoyed at Sam for ruining his attempt to put a smiley face on the situation than he is at Chuck for causing the problem in the first place. It's perfect! Thanks for the hilarious and very timely story. Great job!
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Date: 2013-03-01 05:36 pm (UTC)“Great, Dean, perfect. Then think of all eight million of them the next time you try to do it with one of them, because you know they’ll be reading about it a few months later. Every single detail--whether it was good, whether it was bad, every piggish thought you had, how long you lasted ....”
Dean abruptly stopped smiling. Why did he have to say things like that? Freakin’ Sam! Why’d he have to be so ... so ... logical?! “Thank a lot, bro. Seriously, why’d you have to point that out? Now I won’t be able to do it at all!”
Sometimes I think too much emphasis is placed in fic on Sam being a wet blanket and spoilsport, but I really do see him having this reaction, not to mention how a lot of the humor comes from his being right about what would happen and Dean's reaction. He's almost more annoyed at Sam for ruining his attempt to put a smiley face on the situation than he is at Chuck for causing the problem in the first place. It's perfect! Thanks for the hilarious and very timely story. Great job!