http://mcmaggie01.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mcmaggie01.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brightly_lit 2014-05-06 02:20 am (UTC)

Insighful and absorbing

Fabulous job on the narration and POV. I get tired of poor Sam the victim (although I like them sometimes too). Being around the boys is dangerous despite their best intentions. But that isn't their fault.

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