ext_278377 ([identity profile] toratio.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brightly_lit 2013-11-22 03:57 am (UTC)

Very nice. Captures the undertones of John's feelings perfectly - his guilt, his love, his need to be a father and a solider.

Also, the ending kind of made me sad for Sam - he never got told anything, and then he's told he's ungrateful and he shouldn't leave and he does the wrong thing. Hardly expect him to know what's right when nobody bothers to tell him the truth.

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