How utterly heartbreaking!!! I think you hit characterizations just perfectly, especially after reading the author's notes.
I loved the last line and I just want to cry for Dean. I will admit that I am more of a Dean girl than a Sam Girl. But this story makes me want to hold Dean down and give him lots of hugs.
Are you thinking about writing a sequel? I see something down the line like 2-3 years. Maybe Sam getting his memories back and being absolutely appalled at how he treated Dean. Maybe not knowing that Dean had settled nearby to keep watch over Sam, seeing as all the monsters want a Winchester on a Stick.
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I loved the last line and I just want to cry for Dean. I will admit that I am more of a Dean girl than a Sam Girl. But this story makes me want to hold Dean down and give him lots of hugs.
Are you thinking about writing a sequel? I see something down the line like 2-3 years. Maybe Sam getting his memories back and being absolutely appalled at how he treated Dean. Maybe not knowing that Dean had settled nearby to keep watch over Sam, seeing as all the monsters want a Winchester on a Stick.